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im 11 and i like writing poetry, i wrote this one off the bat, rate it from 1-10 10 for good and 1 that i suck, remember im 11


no one knows,
what you dont show,
your tears at night,
and your fears in sight
the pressure of being beautiful
it makes you feel horrible
the days go by slower and slower
and still yet,
nobody knows,

• 23 hours ago
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by Connie

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October 23, 2010

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Hi,
This is Connie. Well, I have to say, if you are really 11 years old and wrote this poetry it is absolutely great. It seems like you have a very good mind. Make up a pretty book and put all of your writings in it so you can have them as a keep sake or maybe later in life if you would like to publish them you could do so. I am not just saying this but I would give this an "11".

Keep on writing, your very talented.

Connie